This I Believe Post Write
How do you feel about the paper so far? Please explain and offer evidence from the work.
I like the concept of the paper, I just don't know if I told the story in an interesting way. I like the conclusion paragraph. I think it wraps up the paper well, but the body paragraphs may need to be added to.
What remains to be done? Please be precise.
I need to add more detail to some of the paragraphs, and maybe change some of the wording. I am afraid that I may have been too repetitive, so I have to add new ideas.
What questions do you have for readers about the piece?
1)Was the piece interesting? If it wasn't, what can I do to improve it?
2) Was it too repetitive? If so, in what parts?
Thanks. It might be helpful to point out specific passages where you think you are repetitive, no? Or where you think detail may be lacking.
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