Application Essay Post-Write
1)How do you feel about the paper so far? Please explain and offer evidence from the work.
I feel like it is a good foundation for the second draft. I like the intro sentence because I think it grabs the reader's attention, and would make them want to read more. I also like the sensory details that I added to the paper.
2)What remains to be done? Please be precise.
I need to add more detail about the canyon in the second paragraph and in the fourth paragraph. I might be able to add more sensory details in order to make the paper more interesting. I also need to add a conclusion paragraph. I am not sure how to start the conclusion paragraph, though. I am unsure of what to add.
3)What questions do you have for readers about the piece?
- Do you have any suggestions about what I should add as a conclusion?
- Should I emphasize more on anything in the paper? If so, in what parts?
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